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by anklamfaga1979 2020. 2. 15. 08:02

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I really liked your fanfiction, i can totally image it being an episode of fresh prince of bel air. And not to mention the youtube link to carltons dance that was hilarious!! Lol =Dyou have played out each character very well, specially Hillary and Carlton.and this line sounds like something so typical of Will to say 'Must be! Because I A’Dior you in that outfit.

Baby you lookin’ fly!' HahahaLooking forward for your next draft.P.s. Im not sure what you can actully fix with this because its nice as is =. Hey ElanaThis is your evil twin sister Elana commenting on you.

Fresh Prince Of Bel Air Font Greek Week

I have some critiques for you. Here we go.1. Make sure you in the first section of the diolugue that you put Will's name in bold because you missed one of them!2. In the first side direction where you wrote 'Later that night. The doorbell rings.'

Just made sure to put a space between that and the next section of diologue! It will look cleaner and easier to read! I think you just missed that by mistake!3.In Vivians first line.

Make sure you put a comma after 'Carlton!' After Anale walks in, and vivian says welcome to out home. You put 'out home' by mistake.

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Just change it to 'our'.5. When will introduces Anale to ashley. She says 'NIce to meet you Ashley'. Make sure only the N is capatolized! When Ashley responds to that.

Make sure there is a comma after 'You are right Will,.' Make sure there is a space after the stage direction (Jefferey pounds fists with Will)8. When Phil says 'So Anale Will tells me your a fashion design' It should say 'You're not Your'Other then that eveything looks good! Very witty play on words like 'A'dior' and 'cobbles it down'. Good structure and easy to read!

It was also quite Comedic and stuck to the characters personalities perfectly! Good Job-Elana.

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